分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累

　　【主体段分段】：

　　<方法1>：按照时间分段

　　<方法2>：按照趋势分段(本篇文章采用此种分段方法)

　　【开头段】

　　The table compares the percentage of commuters taking public transport to work or study in 7 cities of Australia from 1996 to 2006.

　　【概述段】

　　In general, compared with people in other 6 cities, more people in Sydney chose public transport for commuting throughout the decade. Except Hobart and Perth, the public transport in other cities witnessed a rising trend in their usage.

　　思路要点：

　　- Sydney数值一直最高

　　- 除了Hobart和Perth之外，其余城市的数值都↑

　　【Body 1】

　　We can see that in the first 5-year period, Sydney and Canberra saw a noticeable rise in the number of public transport passengers from 30% to 36% and from 20% to 28% respectively, followed by a slight decline in these two figures by 3%. By contrast, the proportion of passengers in Perth dropped noticeably from 15% in 1996 to only 7% in 2001, before climbing marginally to 9% in the final year.

　　思路要点：Sydney+Canberra+Perth

　　- Sydney和Canberra：先上升→后下降

　　对比而言，

　　- Perth：先下降→后上升

　　【Body 2】

　　It is also clear that in the initial year, 23% of the commuters in Melbourne and 13% of those in Brisbane chose public transport for commuting. Subsequently, these two figures experienced a significant growth by roughly 7%. Although the figure in Adelaide remained stable at 19% in the first 5 years, a fractional increase could be found to 22% in 2006. However, the given 10 years’ period witnessed a constant fall in the percentage of public transport users in Hobart, with the figure falling by 3%.

　　思路要点：Melbourne + Brisbane+Adelaide

　　- Melbourne和Brisbane：第一年分别是23%和13%→随后小幅度上升

　　- Adelaide：前两年平稳→随后小幅度上升

　　- Hobart：持续下降