IELTS Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes.
The maps below show the centre of small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Plan Your Answer
1.审题:
仔细阅读题目要求,认真比较分析两幅地图,准确把握“未变”和重要的变化。
2.规划:
确定如何组织行文,慎重选择最重要的信息点进行描述和比较,不可机械地罗列出所有细节。
3.写作:
(1)写开头段落(introduction):首先,改写主题句(在不丢失图表信息的前提下,尽可能简洁)。然后,用一两句话概述重要的变化,一般无须提及具体的细节。
(2)写主体段落(body):对重要变化或特征进行比较详细的描述和比较,
4.检查:
写完后对时态、词形、介词、拼写、比较级等进行核对。
Sample Answer
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The diagrams illustrate some proposed changes to the central area of the town of Islip. It is clear that the principal change to the town will be the construction of a ring road around the centre. Various other developments with regard to shops and housing will accompany the building of this road.
It can be seen from the map of Islip that a main road runs through its centre from east to west. The second map shows the planned pedestrianisation of this road. Traffic will be diverted on to a dual carriageway that will form a ring around the town centre.
Currently there is a row of shops along either side of the main road. However, it appears that the shops along the north side of the new pedestrian street will be demolished to make way for a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing area. The shops along the south side of the street will remain, but it seems that the town’s park will be reduced in size so that more new houses can be built within the ring road.
Topic-related Vocabulary
principal adj. 主要的
construction n. 结构
accompany v. 伴随
pedestrianisation n. 步行化
carriageway n. 车行道
Coherence & Cohesion
currently 意为“目前”,表明时间。
however 意为“然而”,在文中表示对比。
Sentence Structure
1. Various other developments with regard to shops and housing will accompany the building of this road.
这条路的建设还将包括其他各种与商店和住房相关的发展项目。
2. The shops along the south side of the street will remain, but it seems that the town’s park will be reduced in size so that more new houses can be built within the ring road.
沿街南侧的商店将保留下来,但城镇公园的规模似乎将会缩小,以便在环路内建造更多的新房子。