很多学在申请国外大学的时候在雅思成绩方面,有那么一两项单课成绩总是差那么0.5-1分,不管是考几次结果都还是一样。很多烤鸭们都不知道自己的问题出自在哪里,下面就让小编介绍一下雅思1分的差距查哪里吧!
我这样说,不是危言耸听,不信请看下面两个句子,你知道考官更欣赏哪一个吗?
It is more essential for young people to do physical exercises because doing exercises contributes to a favorable image and it’s a wise choice for the young to release pressure by doing sports.
It is more essential for young people to do physical exercises because doing exercises contributes to a favorable image and release of the pressure.
很多同学看完句子后可能都会说当然是个句子啦,个句子字数更多,用了更多的复杂句式,显得更,如果你这样想就大错特错啦,说明你根本不了解考官对于语言的评定。
如果不信,请你再看一个句子:
Nutritionists consider Greek yogurt to be a healthy food: it is an excellent source of calcium and protein, serves as a digestive aid, and it contains few calories.
你觉得这个句子有错误吗?
很多同学看完后可能会说这个句子写的很好啊,并没有什么错误啊。但如果你这样想,就又是too young to naïve啦~
你会发现这个句子冒号后面是一个并列结构,分别并列了is an excellent source of calcium and protein,serves as a digestive aid和contains few calories三个动宾结构,它们共用一个主语it,所以在并列时应该把it在第二个和第三个动词前省略掉,这样的句子才平行而且简洁,才是考官眼中的好句子。
看完上面雅思1分的差距后大家有没有所感呢,看完之后大家赶紧去复习哦~争取下次考试拿到自己理想的成绩哈~