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雅思小作文支招

作者: 2019-11-13 10:17 来源:深圳编辑
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分享雅思考试小作文真题范文,成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。今天的主题是表格,提供一篇高分范文,供同学们参考!

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题源:剑桥真题集1130页(六个饼)

高分范文及解析

信息分组:根据用水目的分组:

Agricultural Use: North America & Europe VS the other four regions

Industrial Use: North America & Europe VS the other four regions

1和组2呈现出相反关系,于是再合并。

Domestic Use: North America, South America, and Europe VS the other three regions

然后,写作内容的顺序就根据信息分组来。

Introduction

Body

先总写格局/趋势(不带数值)→ In North America and Europe, water is used mainly for manufacturing and other production 注意词汇:题目中的 industrial use被替换, and this situation is just the opposite of the situation in the other four regions, where water is used mainly for agricultural use. 把分组1和分组2都带进去写了。然后,写突出的具体数值 Industrial production consumes as much as roughly half of North Americas and Europes respective total water usage, and the usage by the agricultural sector accounts for one-third or slightly more. In the other four regions, the agricultural use of water is between the minimum of 71 percent (South America) and the maximum of 88 percent (Central Asia), and the industrial use of water is divided, 大家的写作习惯是用定语从句介绍数值,其实可以用状语从句引出数值作为语法亮点   as its percentage is below 10 in Africa and Central Asia and around 10 in South America and Southeast Asia.

In terms of the household use 注意词汇:题目中的domestic use被替换, South America is particularly noteworthy, 用状语从句引出数值作为语法亮点   as almost one-fifth of the total water used is for this purpose. This figure is higher, to different extents, than the ones in other five regions.

注意全文中句子主语(方框斜体)的多样。

Conclusion

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