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托福独立写作:常用而又易出错的词汇

作者: 2021-12-02 09:45 来源:深圳编辑
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托福独立写作考查的是考生对词汇的运用,相信很多考生都出现过类似的情况吧,在写作时,明明很简单的词汇却出错了,所以为了避免大家出错,在这里简单整理了一些常用而又易出错的词汇。

托福独立写作:常用而又易出错的词汇

托福独立写作词汇错误:主谓一致

我们来看以下句子:

Admittedly, books written on the basis of realities is valuable to most people.

A less complicated social environment is the most agreeable condition that help maintain the simplicity of children’s mental world.

一句句子的主语是books,因此谓语动词应该用复数形式are而不是is,这就是主谓一致,即:谓语动词在单复数形式上要和主语保持一致。因此,原句的正确表达为:Admittedly, books written on the basis of realities are valuable to most people.

第二句句子的主语是a less complicated social environment,谓语动词应该用单数形式helps. 因此,原句的正确表达为:A less complicated social environment is the most agreeable condition that helps maintain the simplicity of children’s mental world.

我们再来看以下句子:

The number of students who walk to school has been significantly increased.

A large number of advertisers are filling commercials with appealing visual effects so as to spark consumers’ desires to buy such targeted products.

在托福独立写作中,the number ofa large number of是考生经常使用的两个短语,前者表示“…的数量,后者表示大量的。第 一句句子中的主语是the number of students学生的数量是单数的,所以谓语应该使用单数形式has,而不是have. 又如:There has been a sharp increase in the number of Internet users since last year. 第二句句子中的主语是a large number of advertisers大量的广告商是复数的,所以谓语应该使用复数形式are,而不是is.

托福独立写作词汇错误:谓语动词的表现形式

我们来看以下句子:

Most students like to watch TV cannot finish their homework in time.

Children who find passion in sports holding on to this passion throughout life, which leads to a healthier and more successful future.

一句句子中like to watch TVcannot finish their homework in time都是谓语动词,一般而言,两个谓语动词需要用连词(andbut)进行连接,或者可以将like to watch TV变为从句,如:Most students who like to watch TV cannot finish their homework in time(定语从句).

第二句句子没有谓语。句子中who find passion in sports是修饰children定语从句which leads to a healthier and more successful future是以which为引导的非限定性定语从句。整句句子的谓语动词应该是hold,而不应该使用非谓语形式(holding)。在托福独立写作中,尤其要注意there be句型中谓语的表现形式,如:

There are a great variety of articles and topics accurately reflect the diversity of users’ interest.

因为there be句型中的be本身就是谓语成分,所以不能使用reflect,而应改为:There are a great variety of articles and topics that accurately reflect the diversity of users’ interest(定语从句);There are a great variety of articles and topics accurately reflecting the diversity of users’ interest(非谓语结构)

托福独立写作词汇错误:谓语动词的语态

语态表现的是主语和谓语之间的关系,托福独立写作中主要使用主动语态,不建议频繁使用被动语态

我们来看以下句子:

Many children can avoid their most disliked courses if they are given the opportunity to choose.

Because the content of an e-book is delivered electronically to their devices, students can shop for e-books and receive them almost immediately, any time of the day or night.

一句句子中避免最不喜欢的课程动作的发出者是孩子们,因此是主动语态”;而他们提供机会进行选择是被动的。第二句句子中电子书的内容将电子版本传输到学生的设备之中被动的关系,而学生购买电子图书不管白天还是黑夜,可以第 一时间收到这些图书都是主动的关系。

我们来看下面的例句:

Modern citizens are faced unprecedented psychological pressure when they are heavily loaded with mountains of information from the network of mass media.

从句中,they (指现代公民,modern citizens)和满载着大量信息(load with mountains of information)被动的关系,而他们和面临空前的心理压力(face unprecedented psychological pressure)主动的关系,所以原句应该改为:Modern citizens are facing unprecedented psychological pressure when they are heavily loaded with mountains of information from the network of mass media.

在托福独立写作中,face是考生经常需要使用到的单词,解释为面临、直面face也是一个很难正确使用的单词。当要表达他面临着很多生意上的麻烦意思的时候,考生可以使用He is facing many business troubles. 或者He is faced with many business troubles. 因为face往往用于主动语态,而be faced with用于被动语态,又如:

When facing overwhelming challenges, each individual should be well equipped with a vast range of knowledge and a broadened mind.

When they are faced with the increasingly powerful domination of money, people ought to take precautions as early as possible so as not to become slaves of wealth.

以上就是托福独立写作词汇类问题中的谓语动词错误解析,希望本次内容对各位有所帮助。

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