大家都知道作文一科无论中文还是英文,想要拿到满分难度是非常高的,因而托福作文30分里拿到了29分的考生也足以被称为高手,其写作经验自然很有参考价值。下面小编会分享一位托福写作29分考生的写作经验,主要是写作句式方面的资料汇总。
托福写作29分高 手作文句式分享
1. 强调重要性的句式
(1) The importance of ... can never be overestimated.
注释:这个句子可在全文的任何地方出现,可以用于表达观点:As far as I'm concerned, the importance of learning English can never be overestimated.也可以用于总结:Thus, the importance of cultivating a sense of independence can never be overestimated.
(2) ... has been playing an increasingly important role in ...
注释:这个句子可用于开头:Today, Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our society。也可以在段落首用于表达观点,不过我个人通常用于表达观点,因为开头我有固定模板。
(3) ... is a strong determinant of ...
注释:这个句子类似(1)句,也是可以在任何地方出现,比如whether a student has developed some skills is a strong determinant of whether he can get a good job.
2. 权衡对比表达观点的句式
(1) when ..., we need to give full consideration to ...
注释:这句话很显然是用于表达观点的,我一般在第1段的最后一句使用:when deciding on building a chemical plant, the government should give full consideration to the advantages and disadvantages it will bring to the community.
(2) ... is valued more than ...
注释:这句也是用来表达观点的,我一般用在第1段:developing economy is valued more than protecting environment by some people。
(3) favor ... as opposed to ...
注释:相比之下更喜欢,也是用于表达观点:Many people favor protecting the environment as opposed to developing the economy alone.
3. 举例常用句式表达
有三种常用表达:
A perfect example can be found in ...
... serves as a perfect example
... has well illustrated this
例如:A perfect example can be found in Microsoft which insists on clean technology.
Microsoft, which insists on clean technology, serves as a perfect example.
Microsoft, which insists on clean technology, has well illustrated this.
举完例子觉得不够,就再加一个:
... is not alone in ...
比如:Microsoft is not alone in holding the idea。
然后就开始举另一个例子吧。
4. 描述结果的句式
(1) the attempt by ... to ... has been a tremendous success.
注释:这个句子也可以用于举例也可以用于总结:The attempt by the government to help gaint panda has been a tremendous success.
(2) a better understanding of ... will enable ...
注释:这个句子超有用,可以用于表达观点,可以用于总结,可以用于引出例子:A better underdtanding of ourselves will enable us to live better lives.
(3) an examination of ... will confirm such a fact that ...
注释:这个也超有用,我主要用来引出例证和表达观点:An examination of those students with excellent academic performance will confirm such a fact that diligence and efficient methods contribute a lot to their success.
(4) ... have generally come to recognize the wisdom of ...
注释:这个句子可放在开头:Most people now have generally come to recognize the wisdom of being able to speak English.
以上这些句式就是来自托福写作高 分考生的资料整理,大家如果能够学会这些句式写法,想要写出高 分作文也就指日可待了。
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