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题目:办公室内不同办公活动的时间占比
类型:饼图/动态图
考点/写作要点:
1. 注意改写题目,1980到2000刚好二十年的时间,可以变为two decades.
2. 动态图要注意数据的上升/下降/不变的趋势;
3. 时态:过去时, 过去完成时;
4. 一直到2000年才出现了用Email沟通交流的方式;
5. 变化的是电脑的使用时间占比,从2%上升到了30%,并且在2000成为的办公方式之一;
6. 电话和书面档案(paper document)的使用时间下降;
7. 面对面交流这个办公方式使用时间没有变化;
范文:
The two pie charts give information about how much time was spent on activities in an American office over two decades (1980-2000).
It is clear that in 1980, the most popular activities in the office was to phone other people, accounted for around 30%. Followed by using paper document, took up of 20% of the total percentage. Meanwhile, using computer was the lowest, only 2% of workers prefer this method. The ratio of face-to-face communication, meeting and other activities were similar, accounted for 14%, 19% and 15% respectively.
There had been some changes in the ways of working in 2000. One of the major differences was that people started to use email to communicate at work, which made up of 8%. Also, the time spent on computers took up the highest proportion (30%). Meanwhile, holding meetings became the least popular for employees (6%). The rate of paper document decreased by half, while the proportion of other activities and talking stayed constant.
Overall, it can be seen from the chart that instead of the traditional approach such as using paper document or face-to-face meetings, the use of technology had been adopted by many office workers.
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