今天我们会学到雅思流程图的写作方法,关于这类题目我们需要这样哪些东西呢?
For this type of question you will be given a diagram which shows a process
这种题型中会看到一个显示流程的图标
The process could be how a product is made, how waste is recycled or how a natural process takes place.
这个图表可能是产品制作的流程、垃圾回收的过程或者一些自然现象发生的过程。
There is usually no data, or very little data included
通常这类图表是没有或者只有极少量的数据。
Your task is to summarize the information shown in the diagram
我们的写作任务就是总结好表格上的信息。
这里有什么写作技巧呢?
Since there is no data, you do not need to worry as much about trends or comparisons.
既然没有数据资料,那就不需要担心数据趋势或者数据比较。
The process does not take place at a specific time or in a specific place — the diagram just shows what happens — so you can use present tenses (usually present simple and possible present perfect)
流程不会在特定的时间或者地点发生,流程图知识显示出发生的事情,所以我们可以用现在时(通常可以用现在时或者现在完成式)
Use a mixture of active and passive voice to show your range or grammar
我们也可以合理地使用主动以及被动语态来展示我们的语法多样性
好的,废话少说,我们拿一道考场真题来练一下手
The diagram below shows how jam is made from fruit
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the key features and make comparisons where relevant
-You must write at least 150 words
-You should spend around 20 minutes on this task
流程图写作很简单,
我们一定要注意相应的技巧
This diagram shows a precess from the start to the finish, so locates these points first
这张流程图显示了从开始到结束的一个流程,所以我们上考场先画出开始和结束这两个点
Use the order of the stages in the process to structure your description
利用流程中各阶段的顺序来构建你的文章
Use linking words to show the sequence of actions in the process
(First,… Next,… Then,… After that,… Finally, … etc.)
利用连接词来表现出流程中一系列活动的顺序
When writing your overview, try to summarize by grouping individuals stages into phases.
当我们写总体的概括时,试着把个别的步骤分组变成段落。
Try not to copy too much from the words and phrases sown in the diagram. Use synonyms, change word forms or think of other ways to stay the words if you know exactly what they mean
尽量不要过度抄袭图表上的文字或者用语,我们可以使用同义词或者改变单词的词性,如果你很确定这个单词的意思,你也可以用其他方式来表达。
Use present tense for the entire description
使用现在完成时来完成整篇文章的写作
Use a mixture of active and passive voice
我们可以混合地使用主动以及被动语态
那么这篇我们来尝试写一张这篇文章
段:改写题目
The diagram illustrates the procedure used to make fruit jam.
这个图表说明了制作果酱的步骤。
第二段:描述流程图的总体
Overall, it is clear that there are nine stages, beginning with the preparation of the fruit and ending with the storage of fruit jam in jars. The process has two main phases, namely the preparation and cooking phases.
总的来说,很明显,有九个阶段,从准备水果开始,到最后把果酱储存在罐子里。这个过程有两个主要阶段,即准备和烹饪阶段。
第三段:阶段的描述
The first stage of the process is selecting the ripened fruit which is ready for jam-making. At the next stage, the fruit is washed to remove any insects and dirt. Then the peel, seeds, and core are removed from the fruit, leaving only the flesh behind. Subsequently, the fruit is pulped and then sugar, citric acid and pectin are added to the mixture.
这个过程的步是选择成熟的水果,准备做果酱。下一阶段,清洗水果以去除任何昆虫和污垢。然后剥去果皮、种子和果核,只留下果肉。然后,将水果打成浆,然后加入糖、柠檬酸和果胶。
第四段:最后阶段的描述
During the cooking stage, the fruit mixture is heated to a low temperature and then cooked gently for around 15 minutes. After the mixture has cooled, it is poured into jars, which are then sealed to preserver the jam. The jar s can then be stored ready to be used.
在烹饪阶段,水果混合物被加热到低温,然后轻轻地煮大约15分钟。当混合物冷却后,将其倒入罐子中,然后密封以保存果酱。然后可以存储这些罐子,以备使用。
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