托福写作真题范文 | 三两招突破独立写作系列

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举例。

解读：抽象话题，没有具体的情景。于是，通过举例设置具体的情景来完成讨论。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.

以【立场： remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important】为例，展示这一招：

The essence of doing anything may not be attaining the desired goal but enjoying the rocess.

接下来怎么办？抽象话题，没有具体的情景。于是，通过举例设置具体的fail或achieve success的情景或者经历来完成讨论。

I have personally met many failures and successes in my study. To reflect on the many past achievements and disappointments, I find that those results did not really matter. What really mattered is how I managed to achieve a goal or what mindset I adopted in the face of being unable to achieve the desired result. As long as the learning, as the process, was productive and enlightening, I did not care about the grades, and it was being able to remain happy and optimistic when I failed that made the process meaningful.

注意：举例中，不一定特别具体的某个事件（比如，不是具体的某个presentation、experiment或者paper），而可以是一种宽泛的情况。

别急，还有福利。

如果我们【立场：remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important】，轻松复制这一招：

Success creates a pleasure that is far more joyful and overwhelming than the happiness or optimism we have when we fail.

上一个演示段落里设置的具体的fail或achieve success的情景或者经历，简单调整就可以用来讨论另一个立场了，轻松、省脑。

I have personally met many failures and successes in the many examinations I have taken. To revisit the many past accomplishments and disappointments, I find that those good grades were way more enjoyable than the resilient mindset in the face of poor grades. This is best illustrated by a particular case that I failed multiple times in my attempt to pass the qualification test of being a nutritionist and eventually achieved a passing score and got the license in my third attempt. The joy was a feeling that is so strong that no optimism in any failure can create.